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My friend could really use a business plan writer. I just read the business plan he wrote for his new business venture and although I don't want to hurt his feelings, I have to be honest and tell him the truth. I am not impressed at all. How would he convince other people to invest in his business if the plan doesn't sound convincing at all. I just hope he won't take it against me. I am just concerned because he already spent a lot of time, money and effort for this. I don't want to see it all go to waste.